User contributions for DoTheMoses
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March 31, 2021
- 11:0211:02, March 31, 2021 diff hist +34 Halo 2 →Plot synopsis: Updated to improve grammar (active voice over passive voice, verb tense agreement, removed misplaced modifiers, cleared up unclear pronoun references, etc.) Moved links to Miranda Keyes and her ship to where they are first referenced in the plot. Removed some redundant wording. Lastly, fleshed out details from John and the Arbiter's meeting with the Gravemind and when John leaves Cortana on the High Charity.
March 30, 2021
- 18:3618:36, March 30, 2021 diff hist +26 m Halo: The Fall of Reach - The Animated Series →Plot summary: Made minor updates to some wording, fixed a couple grammatical errors, and made language consistent throughout.