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Your Edits
Alright, first of all, welcome to Halopedia. I would suggest you to read and follow the Manual of Style. Please make sure your grammer is correct ("Cortana knew" and not "cortania know"), your spelling is correct ("alley" is not "ally"), capitalize names ("Keyes" and not "keyes"), use third person narratives (No using "You"), and use punctuations. —S331 (COM • Mission Log • Profile) 11:12, 20 January 2012 (EST)