Talk:Halo: The Thursday War: Difference between revisions
Plot Summary Criticism
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==Shoddy change-of-style== | |||
I got about a third the way through the plot summary, and found the style of writing shift significantly. It's clear another writer has taken their own shot at summarising everything beyond that, but it reads as very amateurish and disjointed, at times mentioning points for the first time as though they had come up before. Could be done a lot better than what is currently there. | |||
==Red Dot== | ==Red Dot== | ||
If anyone's wondering about the red dot (there's been some [http://carnage.bungie.org/haloforum/halo.forum.pl?read=1137739| talk]), see [[:File:S avatar halo reach.jpg|this]]. - [[User talk:DefeatingLine|DefeatingLine]] 10:02, 6 May 2012 (EDT) | If anyone's wondering about the red dot (there's been some [http://carnage.bungie.org/haloforum/halo.forum.pl?read=1137739| talk]), see [[:File:S avatar halo reach.jpg|this]]. - [[User talk:DefeatingLine|DefeatingLine]] 10:02, 6 May 2012 (EDT) | ||