Talk:Battle of Voi: Difference between revisions

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In good wiki writing, there should never be an "Introduction" section. In all articles, the "introduction" should be the lead section i.e. the section without a heading at the top. Also, the first section of an article like this should be named "Background" and be used for background information. At the moment, it is a summary - which is what the introduction is supposed to be. Time to rewrite in my opinion. Thoughts? [[User:The 888th Avatar|<span style="color:blue;">The 888th Avatar</span>]] [[User_talk:The 888th Avatar|<sup><span style="color:blue;">(Talk)</span></sup>]] 12:00, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
In good wiki writing, there should never be an "Introduction" section. In all articles, the "introduction" should be the lead section i.e. the section without a heading at the top. Also, the first section of an article like this should be named "Background" and be used for background information. At the moment, it is a summary - which is what the introduction is supposed to be. Time to rewrite in my opinion. Thoughts? [[User:The 888th Avatar|<span style="color:blue;">The 888th Avatar</span>]] [[User_talk:The 888th Avatar|<sup><span style="color:blue;">(Talk)</span></sup>]] 12:00, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
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I edited the part whre it said the UNSC had one survivor. I played it on the  higher diffuculties and managed to save alot more.--[[User talk:Sgt.T.N.Biscuits|Sgt.T.N.Biscuits]] 00:07, March 21, 2010 (UTC)