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'''Jones''': Here, let me give him my "Welcome to [[Earth]]" gift basket.
'''Jones''': Here, let me give him my "Welcome to [[Earth]]" gift basket.


(Jones puts his Sniper Rifle above cover and shoots the Jackal down)
(Jones puts his Sniper Rifle above cover. The Jackal takes a second shot but misses again, and is killed by Jones.)


(The Jackal's body falls from the ledge and lands next to the Grunts, scaring them back to their previous location. [[M9 High-Explosive Dual-Purpose Grenade|Frag Grenade]] explodes nearby.)
(The Jackal's body falls from the ledge and lands next to the Grunts, causing them to drop their [[type-25 Directed Energy Pistol|pistol]] and scaring them back to their previous location. An [[M9 High-Explosive Dual-Purpose Grenade|Frag Grenade]] explodes nearby.)


(The first Grunt runs by the Elite, however, he manages to grab the second one by the neck, growls loudly at him while the Grunt drops his [[type-25 Directed Energy Pistol|pistol]] and becomes even more panicked. The Elite then throws him aside. He then activates his Active Camouflage and jumps down towards the ODSTs.)
(The first Grunt runs by the Elite; he grabs the second one by the neck, and growls loudly at him before throwing him aside. He then activates his Active Camouflage and jumps down towards the ODSTs.)


(Cut to ODSTs. They walk toward the ground floor of the hotel. Suddenly, the Elite activates its Energy Sword and slices at Butkis, cutting his Battle Rifle in half.)
(Cut to ODSTs. They walk toward the ground floor of the hotel. Suddenly, the Elite activates its Energy Sword and slices at Butkis, cutting his Battle Rifle in half.)
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'''Butkis''': Whoa...!
'''Butkis''': Whoa...!


(Butkis falls down. He stands up wielding the Grunt's Plasma Pistol. He waves it around, scanning for the Elite.)
(Butkis falls down. He stands up wielding one of the Plasma Pistols and holds down an overcharged burst. He waves it around, scanning for the Elite.)


'''Stacker''': Damn, where is he? Anybody see him?
'''Stacker''': Damn, where is he? Anybody see him?
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(The Elite grabs Jones by the neck and uses him as a hostage, with the Energy Sword at the ready. Butkis charges his Plasma Pistol, while Stacker and Walpole aim their Battle Rifles at the alien.)
(The Elite grabs Jones by the neck and uses him as a hostage, with the Energy Sword at the ready. Butkis charges his Plasma Pistol, while Stacker and Walpole aim their Battle Rifles at the alien.)


(Elite starts to say something, most likely threats. It roars at them.)
(Elite growls incomprehensibly at them.)


'''Jones''': (struggling, groans): Take him, guys!...
'''Jones''': (struggling, groans): Take him, guys!...


(Elite continues to roar)
(Elite continues to growl.)


'''Stacker''': Cook the bastard.
'''Stacker''': (quietly) Cook the bastard.


(Butkis discharges the Plasma Pistol, taking down its shields. Stacker fires a Battle Rifle burst at the Elite, and it dies, its hand slowly unclenching the Energy Sword, deactivating it, while Jones rubs his neck gasping.)
(Butkis discharges the Plasma Pistol, taking down its shields. Stacker fires a Battle Rifle burst at the Elite, and it dies, its hand slowly unclenching the Energy Sword, deactivating it. Jones rubs his neck, gasping.)


'''Cortana (radio)''': Second squad, this is Cortana. What is your status, over?
'''Cortana (radio)''': Second squad, this is Cortana. What is your status, over?
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(Stacker helps Jones stand up.)
(Stacker helps Jones stand up.)


'''Gunnery Sergeant Stacker (radio)''': We're operational, Ma'am. Barely. Our pilots didn't make it.
'''Gunnery Sergeant Stacker (radio)''': We're operational, ma'am...barely. Our pilots didn't make it.


(Walpole kicks the Elite's body over and stares at it.)
(Walpole kicks the Elite's body over and stares at it.)
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