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==Anything you didn't like about the book== | ==Anything you didn't like about the book== | ||
Don't get me wrong, I thought Tobias did a great job with the story. I have just one issue. Keyes got promoted straight from Lieutenant to Commander in 2534, which meant that he was stuck with the rank for 16 years. I thought he should have become just a Lt. Cdr., so it flows better with his career. What about you, was there something you felt didn't fit quite right? | Don't get me wrong, I thought Tobias did a great job with the story. I have just one issue. Keyes got promoted straight from Lieutenant to Commander in 2534, which meant that he was stuck with the rank for 16 years. I thought he should have become just a Lt. Cdr., so it flows better with his career. What about you, was there something you felt didn't fit quite right? Arby116 | ||
: Well, both Jenkins and Johnson held the ranks of Private First Class and Staff Sergeant for over 20 years but I agree that he sould have been a Lt. Cdr. first before becoming a Commander[[User talk:SPARTAN-177|SPARTAN-177]] 00:38, 11 February 2009 (UTC) | : Well, both Jenkins and Johnson held the ranks of Private First Class and Staff Sergeant for over 20 years but I agree that he sould have been a Lt. Cdr. first before becoming a Commander[[User talk:SPARTAN-177|SPARTAN-177]] 00:38, 11 February 2009 (UTC) | ||