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==Shoddy change-of-style== | ==Shoddy change-of-style== | ||
I got about a third the way through the plot summary, and found the style of writing shift significantly. It's clear another writer has taken their own shot at summarising everything beyond that, but it reads as very amateurish and disjointed, at times mentioning points for the first time as though they had come up before. Could be done a lot better than what is currently there.{{Unsigned| 58.161.50.174}} | I got about a third the way through the plot summary, and found the style of writing shift significantly. It's clear another writer has taken their own shot at summarising everything beyond that, but it reads as very amateurish and disjointed, at times mentioning points for the first time as though they had come up before. Could be done a lot better than what is currently there.{{Unsigned| 58.161.50.174}} | ||
:Hadn't you read | :Hadn't you read the [[Talk:Halo:_The_Thursday_War#Reading_now.2FSummary|above]] [[Talk:Halo:_The_Thursday_War#Too_soon.3F|text]], you would've realized that we already discussed this issue. Its still a work in progress as half of the summary has been replaced and the other half is pending replacement.--'''''[[User:Killamint|<span style="color:Black; font-family: Arial;">Killamint</span>]]''''' <small>['''''[[User talk:Killamint|<font color="Red">Comm</font>]]'''''|'''''[[Special:Contributions/Killamint|<font color="Black">Files</font>]]''''']</small> 09:23, 20 October 2012 (EDT) | ||