Talk:SECURITY-class Mjolnir: Difference between revisions

Explaining my edit.
(Explaining my edit.)
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The part I added to the "Note:" portion under the "Unlock" header is at the very end, and by my own admission is not in the best wording possible. If you can re-phrase it to make it more concise, then please do so :) It goes from "By completing..." to "...gamerscore first." Thanks for reading this, and figuring out the smaller details of this would be great to have contributed to.
The part I added to the "Note:" portion under the "Unlock" header is at the very end, and by my own admission is not in the best wording possible. If you can re-phrase it to make it more concise, then please do so :) It goes from "By completing..." to "...gamerscore first." Thanks for reading this, and figuring out the smaller details of this would be great to have contributed to.
[[User:Oranos2115|Oranos2115]] 07:52, 25 November 2007 (UTC)
[[User:Oranos2115|Oranos2115]] 07:52, 25 November 2007 (UTC)
==My Edit==
Basically, I considered it an injustice to those who didn't know the long, buggy history behind unlocking the Security Shoulders to not include all known and speculated information about the process.  I combined what I knew before, what I learned from this page, and what was already present in the article to create the final page.  If you have any more information, please add it.
[[User:Ebola Zaire|Ebola Zaire]] 05:28, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
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