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[[User:Siul S-249|Siul S-249]] ([[User talk:Siul S-249|talk]]) 23:55, 10 October 2015 (EDT) | [[User:Siul S-249|Siul S-249]] ([[User talk:Siul S-249|talk]]) 23:55, 10 October 2015 (EDT) | ||
:Fixed the infobox. Sadly, I can't help with the transcript however, as I don't have the game. -- [[User:Topal the Pilot|'''Topal the Pilot''']] [[File:Blueteam.png|20px]] <small>([[User talk:Topal the Pilot|<span style="color:green">'''Talk'''</span>]]|[[Special:Contributions/Topal the Pilot|<span style="color:green">'''Contribs'''</span>]])</small> 00:53, 11 October 2015 (EDT) | |||
== Regarding transcripts and possible redundancy with "Objectives" section == | |||
I decided to get the transcripts ready for the two mission pages I have created before I move on to the others. Note that in the Objectives section a lot of the events happening around and outside the playable area are described. I did this because that's kind of how it was done on [[Mission 1: Assault on CF-32|Assault on CF-32]] (only a little more extended), altough I now think this should be corrected. | |||
For now, I will write the transcripts, which will include all dialogue, and I will relocate event descriptions from the Objectives section into the Transcript, as it should be. | |||
My proposition is to merge the Objectives section with the Transcript if possible, please take a look at an excerpt of how I would like this to be: | |||
''Two [[AV-14 Hornet|Hornets]] fly above a plaza where a large battle between [[UNSC]] and [[Covenant]] forces takes place. [[M808 Scorpion|Scorpion]] tanks exchange fire with Wraiths while groups of [[UNSC Marine Corps|Marines]] attempt to hold out large numbers of [[Sangheili]] and [[Unggoy]]. Several [[AV-22 Sparrowhawk|Sparrowhawks]], Hornets and [[Type-26 Banshee|Banshees]] battle overhead.'' | |||
*'''[[Kwon|Lieutenant Kwon]] (COM)''': "Spartan. I'm Lieutenant Kwon. I'll be on comms to assist you throughout all your missions." | |||
''As the two Hornets approach the a park, several [[SOEIV]] pods land in the vicinity. The view focuses on a single pod that landed inside the park's boundaries'' | |||
*'''Lieutenant Kwon (COM)''': "That was a bone rattler! The original landing zone got too hot, so we dropped you here instead." | |||
''The SOEIV pod opens and a Spartan-IV clad in orange [[War Master]] armor jumps out'' | |||
*'''Lieutenant Kwon (COM)''': "Looks like the impact busted your weapons. We'll need to replace 'em. Sending you a waypoint." | |||
''⚠ Head into the park'' | |||
Pay attention to the last line I wrote. During gameplay, new objectives are highlighted with a warning sign. This is basicaly my idea on how Transcript and Objectives sections could be merged. | |||
Obviously i'm only adding the basic transcript and nothing else until I hear what others think about this idea, so please vote to support or to reject this. | |||
[[User:Siul S-249|Siul S-249]] ([[User talk:Siul S-249|talk]]) 23:28, 12 October 2015 (EDT) | |||
:Your format looks fine as far as I'm concerned. I think the ''Spartan Assault'' pages only do the "Objectives" sections because they have no transcripts, but if you're willing to write those for ''Spartan Strike'', there really isn't a need to keep the sections separate. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 00:49, 14 October 2015 (EDT) | |||