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*{{Support}} -- Per nomination, although I'm unsure whether I'm allowed to vote. '''<span style=color: #A00000; text: 4px 4px 4px #000; ">''[[User:Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>Coolbuddy379</font>]] <small><sup> [[User talk:Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>(COMLINK)</font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>(Service Record)</font>]]</sup></small>''</span>''' 11:06, 23 March 2017 (EDT) | *{{Support}} -- Per nomination, although I'm unsure whether I'm allowed to vote. '''<span style=color: #A00000; text: 4px 4px 4px #000; ">''[[User:Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>Coolbuddy379</font>]] <small><sup> [[User talk:Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>(COMLINK)</font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Coolbuddy379|<font color=red>(Service Record)</font>]]</sup></small>''</span>''' 11:06, 23 March 2017 (EDT) | ||
*{{Support}}--[[User:Spartacus|<span style="color: green; font-family: Segoe Script; font-size: 11pt;" title="Spartacus is an administrator.">'''''Spartacus'''''</span>]] <sup>'''[[User talk:Spartacus|<span style="color:#808080; font-family: Times New Roman">Talk</span>]] • [[Special:Contributions/Spartacus|<span style="color:#808080; font-family: Times New Roman">Contribs</span>]]'''</sup> 19:45, 24 March 2017 (EDT) | *{{Support}}--[[User:Spartacus|<span style="color: green; font-family: Segoe Script; font-size: 11pt;" title="Spartacus is an administrator.">'''''Spartacus'''''</span>]] <sup>'''[[User talk:Spartacus|<span style="color:#808080; font-family: Times New Roman">Talk</span>]] • [[Special:Contributions/Spartacus|<span style="color:#808080; font-family: Times New Roman">Contribs</span>]]'''</sup> 19:45, 24 March 2017 (EDT) | ||
*{{Oppose}} -- Not a bad article at all, however it lacks many references in the body and the infobox, and most major sections lack quotes, of which there are many to choose from. The intro could also do with a large expansion, going into more detail about he program itself and covering its role in the Covenant War. The article also has a section on the Spartan-IIs in ''Halo Wars'', but makes no mention of ''Halo Wars 2''. Also, in my opinion, the "Publicity" sub-section should be moved to the bottom of the "Personnel" section as it's more about what the public has been told about the program, while the other sections are more directly about the Spartans. -- [[User:Topal the Pilot|'''Topal the Pilot''']] [[File:Blueteam.png|20px]] <small>([[User talk:Topal the Pilot|<span style="color:green">'''Talk'''</span>]]|[[Special:Contributions/Topal the Pilot|<span style="color:green">'''Contribs'''</span>]])</small> 22:03, 24 March 2017 (EDT) | |||