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== | ==Story== | ||
'''''READ THIS!!''''' - This section is for feedback on "The Life of War," my fanfic. I have organized it by user. Please make it a subheading within your section like so: <nowiki> ====Title==== </nowiki>. If you have not made a comment here before, make a heading with your username (<nowiki> ===Username=== </nowiki>) then a sub heading for your comment. Please make sure your spelling and grammar is at least ''decent.''Make sure to sign the post with ''four'' tildes, in order to have the timestamp. [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
''" | ===Updates:=== | ||
#Due to lack of images, this will soon be included: [[Image:BeamEliteShoot.jpg|thumb|Pryo's first time firing a Beam Rifle, and his reaction]] [[User:Ghost sangheili|<font color="red">Pryo 'Zarkum</font>]] [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|19px]] <sup>[[User talk:Ghost sangheili|<font color="orange">My COM </font>]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/Ghost sangheili|<font color="green"> My Work </font>]]</sub><sup>[http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/The_Life_of_War <font color="blue">My Story</font>]</sup> 18:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
#Many people are requesting to have their character included, but I will never retain information that I read once on my board. Instead I would like people to post their characters on this page, with a signature so I know who's it is. Please put it in the appropriate section below. | |||
=== New Characters === | |||
Please just make it as a bulleted entry, with one or two sentences about what your character is like. | |||
== | ==== Elites ==== | ||
*New Character | |||
*Katar Yamos-he is stubborn,showoff,can be a jerk at sometime but is really a nice guy. He gets/got in alot of trouble in military schhol. Once you get to know him he is a nice guy. | |||
*Quilian Killamee-Katars best friend. He is caring to everyone and often appoligises for Katar. He is Katar's right hand man and also gets in trouble. He has a little sister who often sneaks his/others dorm rooms with her friend. | |||
==== Grunts ==== | |||
*New Character | |||
===Lt. Church=== | |||
====Lt. Church's Post==== | |||
I have read it, nice [[User:Lt. Church|Lt. Church]] 05:38, 1 April 2008 (UTC)Lt. Church | |||
=== Noga 'Putumee === | |||
====Feedback, and including Noga 'Putumee in the story==== | |||
It looks good so far. When is it set? Is this his initiation into the army? | |||
' | You could include Noga 'Putumee as his mentor or commander or something similar. or if he goes on a mission when he joins up you could include Noga Putumee there. In my opinion the first option is preferable. this is after noga putumee recovered from his wound on the fist Halo so you could include references to that. If you have read halo the flood you should know his personality. you could alter it slightly to be a bit more caring for the troops under his command after his close to death experience. | ||
Please use my advice. | |||
--'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 19:53, 1 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
== | ====Chapter 2==== | ||
Chapter 2 looking good! | |||
Is this set in the covenant civil war becuase if it is, Noga 'Putumee wil be Noga 'Putum (the ee is for being in the covenant military) | |||
--'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 18:06, 2 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
====RE: Chapter 2 (Again...)==== | |||
You will be one of the instructors at Iruiru [[Image:Major-gr1.gif|18px]] [[User:Ghost sangheili|Pryo 'Zarkum]] 16:24, 9 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
====Chapter 2 (Again...)==== | |||
I like the plot twist and the friendship with Rtas Vadum. It will be a very interesing story by the looks of it. | |||
Mind me asking, when am I going to turn up in the plot of things? | |||
--'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 21:30, 5 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
====Noga 'Putumee's Feedback==== | |||
Wow! It's really cool and I like all the ideas you've put in it! Keep it up! | |||
--'''[[User:Noga 'Putumee]]''' [[image:zealot3.jpg|15px]] 17:25, 5 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
===Stigma-231=== | |||
==== Intrigue ==== | |||
I quite like your story so far! Do you write often? I believe this could be turned into a rather thick storyline, if you have enough patience and such. Tell me when there's more? I'm eager to read more. <br>-[[User:Stigma-231|<font color="black">Umos 'Qikost</font>]] <sup><font color="silver">Sword-wielding Minors and Shining Blue Spiders</font></sup> [[User talk:Stigma-231|<font color="D3D3D3"><sub>Comm</sub></font>]] 02:45, 2 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
===Zarra 'Yairum=== | |||
==== The Story ==== | |||
I love it! Great job so far. By the way Zarra's autobiography is up on my wiki user page if you want to see it. -[[User:Zarra 'Yairum]] | |||
====Swords==== | |||
I know another way I could help with the story. I know a few basic sword fighting techniques. It was part of a martial arts class and I forgot most of it, (it was a long time ago), but I do remember the nine angles of attack, and some methods of blocking and counter attacking. Its realy basic, but it may be useful. I'll put it up here if you need it. -[[User:Zarra 'Yairum]] | |||
== | ====Including My Character==== | ||
I can't wait to read more! You are a good writer. As for Zarra's skills, she is good at sniping, and she is good at sword fighting, but she never uses a sword until around HaloCE. At the point in time your story takes place she is most likely training to become a medic. I can only speculate on what a medic in the covenant would be like but my guess is that they would have very plain armor, weak shields, and stealth. --[[User:Zarra 'Yairum|Zarra 'Yairum]] 16:09, 5 May 2008 (UTC) | |||
===Concilor Katar=== | |||
==== One thing ==== | |||
You would be in the late part of the Age of Conservation if you were born in 2515. The Age of Reclamation begun with the Battle of Harvest I believe. - Councilor Katar | |||
== | ==Everything Not Including the Story== | ||
== | Pretty self explanatory. Same rules as the above section. [[User:Ghost sangheili|Pryo' Zarkum]] 16:44, 31 March 2008 (UTC) | ||
===Read Mine=== | |||
Just read mine: | |||
http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/User:Halo7 | |||
===Fanfiction=== | |||
Hi. Fanfiction isn't allowed on Halopedia, I'm afraid. Please use our sister site [http://halofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page Halo Fanon] instead, and just post a link to it. --<b>[[User:Dragonclaws|<font color="#4D56B1">Dragon<font color="#F28500">c</font>laws</font>]]<sup>([[User talk:Dragonclaws|<font color="#4D56B1">talk</font>]])</sup></b> 05:16, 4 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
*i'm a female elite warrior/specopselite. [[User:SpecopsElite342|SpecopsElite342]] | |||