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== Anachronism section ==
== Anachronism section ==
Regarding the paragraph concerning the augmentation section, the sentence from Fall of Reach is quite ambiguous on its own. Even in our present time, [http://blog.sfgate.com/sfmoms/2012/08/03/adzo-kpossi-the-youngest-athlete-in-the-the-london-olympics most of the 2012 Olympic athletes] look nothing like those in Scanned. Seems like you're thinking of the jocks depicted in our common entertainment media... oh, anyway, I suggest this entire paragraph rewritten or removed: I would prefer removing since it should always be the case of "game canon being superior".— <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  04:05, 8 November 2012 (EST)
Regarding the paragraph concerning the augmentation section, the sentence from Fall of Reach is quite ambiguous on its own. Even in our present time, [http://blog.sfgate.com/sfmoms/2012/08/03/adzo-kpossi-the-youngest-athlete-in-the-the-london-olympics most of the 2012 Olympic athletes] look nothing like those in Scanned. Seems like you're thinking of the jocks depicted in our common entertainment media... oh, anyway, I suggest this entire paragraph rewritten or removed: I would prefer removing since it should always be the case of "game canon being superior".— <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  04:05, 8 November 2012 (EST)
:I support Subtank's suggestion based on the reasons s/he provided in the above paragraph. --[[User:DC Ambrose|DC Ambrose]] ([[User talk:DC Ambrose|talk]]) 11:45, 24 September 2013 (EDT)


:I doubt Nylund was being THAT exact when describing the S-IIs pre-augmentations, and I doubt he'd know much about the anatomy of athletes. He just intended for a basic impression of "young but really buff", and the Spartans seen in Scanned seem to reflect that better than in Prologue. But Scanned isn't the only source. I've also noted the S-IIs' appearance in the ''[[Halo: Fall of Reach]]'' comic book, and they look about the same as in Scanned. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 13:00, 28 January 2013 (EST)
:I doubt Nylund was being THAT exact when describing the S-IIs pre-augmentations, and I doubt he'd know much about the anatomy of athletes. He just intended for a basic impression of "young but really buff", and the Spartans seen in Scanned seem to reflect that better than in Prologue. But Scanned isn't the only source. I've also noted the S-IIs' appearance in the ''[[Halo: Fall of Reach]]'' comic book, and they look about the same as in Scanned. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 13:00, 28 January 2013 (EST)
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::Can't we even agree that the Sangheili armors weren't retconned? For the wiki's sake, such a simple thing that is even stated in the beginning of the game itself. As for the Mark IV, I have little understanding of how someone could mistake it for a Mark VI when the scene is clearly shown as a part of the Human-Covenant War. The similar appearance is not enough, as multiple cross-gen armors often share the same appearance; the energy shields existed and the thrusters were simply a feature of said armor. I really don't see at all how someone could get confused to the point of thinking that these were Mark VI armors from the get-go (This makes me remember people who thought Deliver Hope was wrong because Six was already in the team when Kat had her two arms; but they didn't even think that it could have happened before the game). You don't realize how many people got confused by Halopedia itself since the game's release. I can see that we disagree on many points, and if you have an opinion on a number of things such the armors and so on I'm not intending to change that; but I can't feel but bothered when such an article constantly speculates about whether something is a retcon or not, when it's actually not a retcon. You say that if something isn't immediately obvious in the cutscene, then it's worth to be noted a retcon; but of course the whole cutscene isn't going to break down each scene one by one to explain it by itself, this is our job to say "This is what happened" instead of speculating "This may be what happened or simply a retcon". I know you're probably not going to consider that, so I won't change anything because it's probably not going to pass. Keep the article this way if you want, I can agree to merely let it as it is; I also think the discussion is a dead end as no one else feels concerned. +++ [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 17:52, 27 July 2013 (EDT)
::Can't we even agree that the Sangheili armors weren't retconned? For the wiki's sake, such a simple thing that is even stated in the beginning of the game itself. As for the Mark IV, I have little understanding of how someone could mistake it for a Mark VI when the scene is clearly shown as a part of the Human-Covenant War. The similar appearance is not enough, as multiple cross-gen armors often share the same appearance; the energy shields existed and the thrusters were simply a feature of said armor. I really don't see at all how someone could get confused to the point of thinking that these were Mark VI armors from the get-go (This makes me remember people who thought Deliver Hope was wrong because Six was already in the team when Kat had her two arms; but they didn't even think that it could have happened before the game). You don't realize how many people got confused by Halopedia itself since the game's release. I can see that we disagree on many points, and if you have an opinion on a number of things such the armors and so on I'm not intending to change that; but I can't feel but bothered when such an article constantly speculates about whether something is a retcon or not, when it's actually not a retcon. You say that if something isn't immediately obvious in the cutscene, then it's worth to be noted a retcon; but of course the whole cutscene isn't going to break down each scene one by one to explain it by itself, this is our job to say "This is what happened" instead of speculating "This may be what happened or simply a retcon". I know you're probably not going to consider that, so I won't change anything because it's probably not going to pass. Keep the article this way if you want, I can agree to merely let it as it is; I also think the discussion is a dead end as no one else feels concerned. +++ [[User:Imrane-117|Imrane-117]] ([[User talk:Imrane-117|talk]]) 17:52, 27 July 2013 (EDT)
:::I didn't realised my comment received a reply... months after. :P
:::There are several issues with the cutscene and the writings of section. Firstly, nowhere has it been stated that the flashbacks are from Halsey's memory. It is presumed by the author of the section. The flashbacks are just flashbacks without an origin. If anything, assume that the flashbacks are from disembodied soul (I'll expand more on this later). Secondly, whenever a discrepancy has been adequately explained by a material and resolved, the information on that discrepancy should be removed since it is no longer an issue. There is no point in using external references (i.e. "Red Team would have survived") since it is written that way in 2001. To put it bluntly, if it is written that they don't have access to it, they don't have access to it. That being said, I don't see much issue with the Elite and Brute armours as they are more likely to be variants of their combat harness than they are to be considered as retcons. We've seen this treatment done to the armour changes from Halo 1 to Halo: Reach. The same goes with the MJOLNIR Mk. IV. Thirdly, the physique of the candidate in the augmentation scene matches the description of "18-year-old Olympic athlete". As I provided earlier, [http://blog.sfgate.com/sfmoms/2012/08/03/adzo-kpossi-the-youngest-athlete-in-the-the-london-olympics most of the 2012 Olympic athletes] are nowhere considered as "buff"; however, they are considered as "physically fit", a word I would use to describe [[:File:John-117 fighting ODST team.png|this image of 14yo John with the physique of an 18yo Olympic athelete]]. Since this is an issue of depiction, it is largely dependent on the opinion of the user (in this case, the author of the section). Quite honestly, in my opinion, I don't see a discrepancy with the physique portrayed in the cutscene. If anything, they are within the description of "18yo Olympic athlete".
:::I would consider that the flashbacks in the cutscenes are a retelling of events to players unfamiliar with the expanded universe of Halo, by a disembodied soul. Not to say that everything in the flashback is not canon, only that they are intentionally misplaced. As the section puts it, ''"Rather, it could be considered a summation of the entire [Halo universe]."'' That being said, I suggest a the entire section to be replaced with a few sentences placed in the "Trivia" section. — <span style="font-size:14px; font-family:Arial;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span>  14:43, 29 July 2013 (EDT)


== Brute fight ==
== Brute fight ==
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:I agree with you. Go for it.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 22:35, 16 November 2012 (EST)
:I agree with you. Go for it.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 22:35, 16 November 2012 (EST)
Well, currently none of the other games have levels titled Prologue. I'm unsure. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 22:40, 16 November 2012 (EST)
Well, currently none of the other games have levels titled Prologue. I'm unsure. [[User:Tuckerscreator|<span style="color:#6600cc;">'''''Tuckerscreator'''''</span>]]<sup>([[User talk:Tuckerscreator|<font color="#008000">stalk</font>]])</sup> 22:40, 16 November 2012 (EST)
:Well each game has dialogue before and after gameplay, but no cinematic is specifically referred to as "Prologue" or "Epilogue" that I'm aware of, I'm not sure either.[[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]] 22:59, 16 November 2012 (EST)
:Well each game has dialogue before and after gameplay, but no cinematic is specifically referred to as "Prologue" or "Epilogue" that I'm aware of, I'm not sure either.[[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]][[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]][[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]] 22:59, 16 November 2012 (EST)
::Since there are no other pages with that exact title, I don't think there's any reason to disambiguate this one. Wherever we have the chance, it's best to keep article titles as concise as possible. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:09, 19 November 2012 (EST)
::Since there are no other pages with that exact title, I don't think there's any reason to disambiguate this one. Wherever we have the chance, it's best to keep article titles as concise as possible. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 12:09, 19 November 2012 (EST)
== Discrepancies ==
Game/cut-scene canon > novel canon > promotional content. Simple as that. Also in that trailer they don't look like 'Olympic Athletes', as Olympic Athletes are known for their lithe, graceful, and physically fit appearance, not the ripped, buff jockish look in the trailer, I'd even go so far as to suggest the 'children' in the trailer as being "grossly inaccurate and even ''unrealistic'' in this sense'. --[[User:DC Ambrose|DC Ambrose]] ([[User talk:DC Ambrose|talk]]) 14:26, 24 September 2013 (EDT)
:[http://www.halopedia.org/Halopedia:Canon_policy#Hierarchy_of_canon] Your logic is sound. Subtank also makes some good points above in the other section.[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] [[File:Fett helmet.jpg|20px]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 14:39, 24 September 2013 (EDT)
::Exactly. Which is why I don't see why my edits are being reverted. I've been asked to state my reasons, yet, the staff members are exempt? Last I checked, it wasn't: Halopedia Staff > All other canon. :P --[[User:DC Ambrose|DC Ambrose]] ([[User talk:DC Ambrose|talk]]) 14:44, 24 September 2013 (EDT)
:::Well I can't really speak for them and I haven't been reverting your edits soo...would someone who has been reverting his edits make a comment?[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] [[File:Fett helmet.jpg|20px]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 14:49, 24 September 2013 (EDT)
You seem to be acting as if your edits have been reverted several times. Check the page [http://www.halopedia.org/index.php?title=Prologue&action=history history], it shows that your edits have only been reverted ''once''. I can't speak for why Braidenvl reverted the edits, but if you ask him, I'm sure he will explain.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}}
:To DC Ambrose: I made the edit because I carelessly TL;DR'ed the page before going to work. There had been quite a bit of disagreement over the article's content in months past. When I saw the wording of the post, particularly the use of "canonically obsolete material", I automatically assumed someone was trying to beleaguer the point. I'm sorry. Anyway, I understand your reasoning about John's physique, though I disagree with it. John looks like a sickly twelve-year-old in the cutscene, whereas the Spartan candidates in ''Scanned'' really aren't all that buff (especially given their fairly skinny legs). They're toned, sure, but they aren't built like football players as you described them in your last edit. The whole "body of an eighteen-year-old Olympic athlete" bit is just imagery meant to convey John's physique; it isn't strictly literal. I prefer to think his appearance is due to Halsey's guilt-ridden interpretation. That's just my personal theory, of course; I'm not trying to suggest that his depiction in the ''Prologue'' is invalid. Canon is canon and games are the highest form of canon, but a character's POV can complicate matters. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]] [[File:Gravemind.svg|14px]] ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 00:11, 25 September 2013 (EDT)
::I think we also get thrown off a bit, because the first shot of John sitting in his bed makes him look so young. That's because he is. The first shot is of John shortly after the program began, not right before his augmentations. In the next scene, his face is covered, so we don't see the difference as clearly, but the body proportions are definitely different. His head is much larger in relation to the rest of his body in the first scene as compared to the scene when he lies down on the table. This also fits in with previous media, which showed us John's face as a child under 10 but had it obscured by the time he got his augmentations. <br/>Let's also remember that "Olympic athlete" is a very nebulous term. I can incorporate a wide range of body types; everything from gymnasts to weightlifters. Are the Spartans in "Scanned" somewhat exaggerated? Yes. But "grossly inaccurate"? No, especially when you consider that the Spartans were genetically selected specifically because they were already destined to be much bigger and stronger than the average, then trained relentlessly for seven solid years.<br/> Your point about ''Halo 4'' being superior canon is correct, but your edit definitely needs improvement, both in style and substance.--[[File:Emblem 1.jpg|20px|bottom]][[User:Rusty-112|<span style="font-family:Arial;font-size:13pt;color:blue;">''' Rusty'''</span><span style="font-size:13pt;color:red;">'''-'''</span><span style="font-family:Arial;font-size:13pt;color:blue;">'''112'''</span>]] [[Halopedia:Administrators|<span style="color:red; font-family:Arial">'''''Admin'''''</span>]] <sup>[[User talk:Rusty-112|<font color="blue">'''comm'''</font>]]</sup> 00:17, 25 September 2013 (EDT)
:::Well I'm glad we've solved this conflict. [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7tMzrq43vE Now we celebrate!][[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] [[File:Fett helmet.jpg|20px]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 00:27, 25 September 2013 (EDT)
Well, I've watched both ''Scanned'' and ''Prologue'' several times over in the last little while. Honestly, I don't see very much difference between the Spartans' physiques in the trailer and John's build in the cutscene. Sure the others are a [[:File:S-II's awaiting augmentation.png|little bit]] [[:File:Scanned-Linda-058.jpg|more toned]] [[:File:Prologue - Spartan augmentation 01.jpg|than]] [[:File:Prologue - Spartan augmentation 02.jpg|him]], but he isn't the biggest or strongest Spartan anyway. Plus, there's always the Doylist "live-action versus CGI" handwave. The part about the surgical theater being different was outright wrong, since the "surgical stations" were in fact bunks; the only difference between John's operating table in ''Prologue'' and -073's in ''Scanned'' is [[:File:Prologue - Spartan augmentation 02.jpg|the texture of the seat]]. I don't know why anyone thought the procedure is supposed to be fully automated in ''Prologue'', considering that the trailer shows both the technicians ''and'' the robot arms. ''Prologue'' simply shows a point in the operation when the doctors stepped back and let the machines do their job.
Frankly, I'd like to remove the "Discrepancies" section entirely, perhaps leaving the armor subsection or moving it to production notes. The only genuine inconsistency is John's introduction to Cortana, in which he A) is wearing Mark IV; B) seems to be inside a bunker instead of a tent; and C) meets her via hologram. There's also the surgical diagrams, but those aren't a huge deal. Everything else, including the Covenant armor and the built-in MJOLNIR thruster packs, can be canonically explained. Whatever still doesn't fit can be chalked up to Halsey's interpretation, as the page already suggests.
To Sith Venator: "Victory Celebration" is one of my favorite ''Star Wars'' songs! It's so much more appropriate than "Yub Nub". Too bad the Galactic Civil War won't end for another fifteen years. :) --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]] [[File:Gravemind.svg|14px]] ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 01:54, 25 September 2013 (EDT)
:We should act upon what you said. The built-in thruster pack was what I always thought made this Mark IV variant/Super Special Awesome Cortana Mark VI Upgrade more unique, I dare say more practical. Prototype Energy Shields also always help, Red Team would be proud. P.S. That's the thing about Star Wars though, it's Star WARS! Even still it was a big deal, they axed Palpatine, [http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Transfer_essence kinda].[[User:Sith Venator|<span style="color:green">Sith-venator Wavingstrider</span>]] [[File:Fett helmet.jpg|20px]] ([[User talk:Sith Venator|<span style="color:blue">Commlink</span>]]) 02:11, 25 September 2013 (EDT)
== A young John-117? ==
Do we know for a fact that the child shown is John? Every time I watch it, I can't help but think that it's Halsey dreaming herself as a Spartan candidate. The freckles of the child's face, as well as the facial features, seem to match that of Halsey when we see her in the interrogation room.[[User:Ocean Soul|Ocean Soul]] ([[User talk:Ocean Soul|talk]]) 20:05, 30 October 2013 (EDT)
:It's definitely John. His description matches and the name "John" is stenciled on his outfit. [[User:Forgotten Helljumper|<span style="color:red">Forgotten Helljumper</span>]] 22:56, 30 October 2013 (EDT)
== Spartans Appearance Isn't Canon ==
So, according the Josh Holmes, the apperance of the Spartans in the opening isn't canon:
[https://twitter.com/JoshingtonState/status/474224115608731650]
"We didn't have time to build S-II armor just for intro so we used the S-IV armor in its place. Canonically incorrect I know. :(" {{unsigned|216.172.25.2}}
:That's noted [[List of inconsistencies in the Halo series#Halo 4|here]]. Sure, Holmes claims the armor isn't canon but the ''Halo 4 EVG'' says otherwise. By and large the wiki errs toward a Watsonian point of view over a Doylist one. That being said, if there's an in-universe explanation for a real-world production problem, the canonical explanation takes precedent over "It's just a development goof." His explanation is provided, though. --[[User:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">'''''Our vengeance is at hand.'''''</span>]] [[File:Gravemind.svg|14px]] ([[User talk:Braidenvl|<span style="color:gray">Talk to me.</span>]]) 10:47, 15 October 2014 (EDT)

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