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== Article Cleanup == | == Article Cleanup == | ||
I'd like to suggest this article be marked for a good cleanup. At the very least there seem to be a boatload of grammatical issues (of varying severity), plus scattered direct quotes from canon material which don't appear to be cited properly [[User: ElFroCampeador|ElFroCampeador]] <sup>[[User talk:ElFroCampeador|<font color="red">TALK</font>]]</sup> | I'd like to suggest this article be marked for a good cleanup. At the very least there seem to be a boatload of grammatical issues (of varying severity), plus scattered direct quotes from canon material which don't appear to be cited properly [[User: ElFroCampeador|ElFroCampeador]] <sup>[[User talk:ElFroCampeador|<font color="red">TALK</font>]]</sup> [[Image:Sergeant-gr1.gif|20px]] 23:54, August 18, 2010 (UTC) | ||
:I've cleared up the citation part, if there are any grammatical issues, address them so long as it doesn't change how it was initially presented in official sources. The article already went though a major clean up, so as I see it, it only needs corrections nothing more. [[User talk:Durandal-217|Durandal-217]] 02:02, August 19, 2010 (UTC) | :I've cleared up the citation part, if there are any grammatical issues, address them so long as it doesn't change how it was initially presented in official sources. The article already went though a major clean up, so as I see it, it only needs corrections nothing more. [[User talk:Durandal-217|Durandal-217]] 02:02, August 19, 2010 (UTC) |