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==Washouts==
Based on information from the SDCC 2011 Panel, it appears that some of the rehabilitated washouts from the Class I SPARTAN-II's (as well as Dr. Halsey) are being included in Glasslands.  Where/how should this be included?  
Based on information from the SDCC 2011 Panel, it appears that some of the rehabilitated washouts from the Class I SPARTAN-II's (as well as Dr. Halsey) are being included in Glasslands.  Where/how should this be included?  


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==Other characters==
==Other characters==
Do we have any confirmation that Fred, Kelly, or Linda will be in Glasslands?--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 00:39, 28 July 2011 (EDT)
Do we have any confirmation that Fred, Kelly, or Linda will be in Glasslands?--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 00:39, 28 July 2011 (EDT)
:They'll most definitely be in the novel; but we'll wait until we get more solid info, an excerpt, or the novel's release to add them. [[User:Grizzlei|CommanderTony]]
:They'll most definitely be in the novel; but we'll wait until we get more solid info, an excerpt, or the novel's release to add them. {{User:CommanderTony/Sig}}
::Alright sounds good.--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 00:57, 28 July 2011 (EDT)
::Alright sounds good.--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 00:57, 28 July 2011 (EDT)
:::In addition to my previous question, seeing that there is a mission to Sanghelios, could Arbiter Thel Vadam make an appearance?--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 18:38, 11 August 2011 (EDT)
:::In addition to my previous question, seeing that there is a mission to Sanghelios, could Arbiter Thel Vadam make an appearance?--[[User:Halofan1234|ハローファン]] ([[User talk:Halofan1234|H1234-NET]]) 18:38, 11 August 2011 (EDT)
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There appears to be a possible easter egg regarding Halo Waypoint.  Traviss mentions several times a news agency called "Waypoint."  I, at least, think it's an easter egg, but would like other opinions. [[User talk:AarrowOM|AarrowOM]] 14:02, 26 October 2011 (EDT)
There appears to be a possible easter egg regarding Halo Waypoint.  Traviss mentions several times a news agency called "Waypoint."  I, at least, think it's an easter egg, but would like other opinions. [[User talk:AarrowOM|AarrowOM]] 14:02, 26 October 2011 (EDT)


I first thought that too, when one of the quotes mentions "Waypoint Nine News". [[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]] 14:05, 26 October 2011 (EDT)
I first thought that too, when one of the quotes mentions "Waypoint Nine News". [[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]][[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]][[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]] 14:05, 26 October 2011 (EDT)
:That's indeed ann Easter Egg. But Halsey's Journal also contained several news bulletins that were from 'Waypoint'. Definately an homage. There's already a page on it though.--[[User talk:Thijsbos|Thijsbos]] 02:52, 2 December 2011 (EST)
:That's indeed ann Easter Egg. But Halsey's Journal also contained several news bulletins that were from 'Waypoint'. Definately an homage. There's already a page on it though.--[[User talk:Thijsbos|Thijsbos]] 02:52, 2 December 2011 (EST)


== Game only appearance list ==
== Game only appearance list ==


Considering the scope of the novels, comics, etc. over video games, there should be any particular reason why we have a limited section devoted to in-universe assets (characters, locations, vehicles, etc.) for novels. Nothing in the Manual of Style, etc. suggested that this was a policy worth noting. It would be quite wise to continue to have such content on here, and for assets in other expanded universe material. I'm putting this content back on tomorrow morning (good ol' Pacific time) if nobody has anything to rebuttal concerning my recommendation. Cheers! [[User:Grizzlei|CommanderTony]]
Considering the scope of the novels, comics, etc. over video games, there should be any particular reason why we have a limited section devoted to in-universe assets (characters, locations, vehicles, etc.) for novels. Nothing in the Manual of Style, etc. suggested that this was a policy worth noting. It would be quite wise to continue to have such content on here, and for assets in other expanded universe material. I'm putting this content back on tomorrow morning (good ol' Pacific time) if nobody has anything to rebuttal concerning my recommendation. Cheers! {{User:CommanderTony/Sig}}


:Standards for novel articles is to present Characters section only; this is evident in all novel articles (from FoR to Cryptum) and such practice hasn't changed till this novel was released. Also, it is not recorded in the MoS because the MoS is severely outdated. I suggest the administration team to look into these policies and style guides, and update them to promote consistency, clarity and quality. :) — <span style="font-size:16px; font-family:OrbitronMedium;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span> 19:55, 27 October 2011 (EDT)
:Standards for novel articles is to present Characters section only; this is evident in all novel articles (from FoR to Cryptum) and such practice hasn't changed till this novel was released. Also, it is not recorded in the MoS because the MoS is severely outdated. I suggest the administration team to look into these policies and style guides, and update them to promote consistency, clarity and quality. :) — <span style="font-size:16px; font-family:OrbitronMedium;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span> 19:55, 27 October 2011 (EDT)


::Very well, i'll look into this later. Please void the content re-add deadline as that won't be necessary. Thank you. [[User:Grizzlei|CommanderTony]]
::Very well, i'll look into this later. Please void the content re-add deadline as that won't be necessary. Thank you. {{User:CommanderTony/Sig}}




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What I wanted to happen: Blue Team meets Forerunners, Blue Team discovers Forerunner Warships and uses them to do...anything, that all the Shield Worlds would be linked and that John would go to the Legendary planet and go to the Shield world and see Blue Team, and that Jorge would come out of SlipStream space '''inside''' the sphere and then they would all be frolicking in the grass forever (not really that last part).
What I wanted to happen: Blue Team meets Forerunners, Blue Team discovers Forerunner Warships and uses them to do...anything, that all the Shield Worlds would be linked and that John would go to the Legendary planet and go to the Shield world and see Blue Team, and that Jorge would come out of SlipStream space '''inside''' the sphere and then they would all be frolicking in the grass forever (not really that last part).


My general thoughts: I really liked the book.  Keep 'em coming, Travis! Vegerot goes RAWR! [[User:Vegerot|<span style="color:midnightblue; font-weight:bold">Vegerot</span>]] ([[User talk:Vegerot|<span style="color:grey">talk</span>]])  20:56, 5 November 2011 (EDT)
My general thoughts: I really liked the book.  Keep 'em coming, Travis! Vegerot goes RAWR! [[File:Icon-Vegito2.gif|21px]] [[User:Vegerot|<span style="color:midnightblue; font-weight:bold">Vegerot</span>]] ([[User talk:Vegerot|<span style="color:grey">talk</span>]])  20:56, 5 November 2011 (EDT)


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I generally didnt enjoy the book. i thought that she left too many unanswered questions, didnt use enough facts from the previous books, and didnt write in the format that was a HALO book. She gave the AI black box a great personality, but he bacame way too human. Or the Spartans, they were to civilian. The fact that she gave them personalities that completly counteracted the stoic quiteness that we are used too, and have come too expect. i thought the book deserves a 2/5. Nothing more, nothing less. very few technology, almost no fights, gave the Sangheili human traits, and butchered what shouldve been a big read.-'''HTRK74JR'''
I generally didnt enjoy the book. i thought that she left too many unanswered questions, didnt use enough facts from the previous books, and didnt write in the format that was a HALO book. She gave the AI black box a great personality, but he bacame way too human. Or the Spartans, they were to civilian. The fact that she gave them personalities that completly counteracted the stoic quiteness that we are used too, and have come too expect. i thought the book deserves a 2/5. Nothing more, nothing less. very few technology, almost no fights, gave the Sangheili human traits, and butchered what shouldve been a big read.-'''HTRK74JR'''
:Remember this book is part of a series of books, so any questions in this book should be answered in future books.--'''''<span style="color:green">Commander</span>''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:red">Halofan1234</span>]] (''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">I say</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">the cabal</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:purple">does not exist</span>]]'') 23:09, 1 December 2011 (EST)
:Remember this book is part of a series of books, so any questions in this book should be answered in future books.--'''''[[Help:User Levels|<span style="color:green">Commander</span>]]''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:red">Halofan1234</span>]] (''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">I say</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">the cabal</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:purple">does not exist</span>]]'') 23:09, 1 December 2011 (EST)
::I share the sentiment HTRK74JR. I'm not a fan of it at all, and as a result I haven't read the rest of the Kilo Five trilogy directly ''because'' of that book (though I have read synopses, which suffice for the core information. I remember reading a statement of hers that she doesn't like to know too much about a universe that she's writing about (which results in writing from ignorance,) so that she doesn't form biases with characters and the like. Something that's ridiculous, as ''Glasslands'' would have had the very applicable "Halsey is Hitler and everyone suddenly hates her". In earlier novels, we certainly got characters that rivaled Halsey, and the morally questionable nature of the Spartan II program was never shied away from. But Traviss took all of that and just ramped it up to 11, so much so that it was ridiculous and broke several character personalities - Halsey included. It's my theory that everything from Halo 4 to Halo 5 (including Hunt the Truth) was done to solve the many problems introduced by ''Glasslands''.
 
::The problems that I have with the book are myriad. I could go on a very lengthy rant about it all, but I'll stick to the bigger ones.
 
::First and foremost, there's the complete ignoring of how strong Spartans are. Even Spartan III's. When Halsey is threatening the Huragok with a pistol (which is ''radically'' out of character for Halsey), Lucy-B091 attacks her. It is described that Lucy punched Halsey the big-bad-bully ''in the face'' with such force that it ''"sent a shock wave right up her arm." (Glasslands, pg. 316-17)'' Lucy was in-armor. She's a Spartan, and has augmented strength ''on top of'' the augmentations provided by her armor. By all rights, Halsey should be dead, and her face should be a pulp. But she gets up with nothing worse than a bloody nose.
 
::Then there's Mendez's completely 180° in sentiment towards the Spartan program. A man who, in all other media, understands the risks and necessities of the program, and takes great pride in the soldiers that he trained, now is a simpering, cigar chomping crybaby who - you guessed it - hates Halsey the Big Bad Bully. Despite the program never being ''hers'', and despite the numerous higher-ups of CENCOM that deemed it an absolute necessity, it's all Halsey's fault and she's the worst person who's ever lived.
 
::Ah, and then there's Vasily. The ODST with a heart of applesauce. One of the bigger problems introduced by this book (and I think addressed by Hunt the Truth: Season 1) was the straight-up dissemination of information on the Spartan II and Spartan III programs. Parangosky just ''handing'' it to some random ODST squad (and somehow, then, ''everyone'' knows). The whole bit with him being so enraged that he was going to march down and ''murder'' Halsey was just ridiculous, and his whole infatuation with Naomi was childish (I thought) and out of place.
 
::I know Traviss also has a penchant for killing off major characters - particularly in the Star Wars novels - and I'm glad she didn't get to do that to the Arbiter. She came close, and thanks to her inclusions we saw the Swords of Sanghelios with their backs literally to the wall.
 
::I'm fine with characters hating Halsey. Ackerson and Parangosky have ''always'' opposed her, and it only follows that Parangosky's protege would also be taught to hate her. But to have everyone hate her and literally compare her to Hitler is way too far, and canonically ''wrong''. I'm even fine with ODST liking - maybe even being infatuated with - Spartans, but having some ODST be overly-protective and chivalrous towards a ''Spartan'' is just silly. To me, it just was not a good book, and didn't add much of anything with any value to the Halo universe. Even Jul 'Mdama was a mediocre villain, who is outshined significantly by Atriox and even Sangheili within his own ranks.[[User:The Ragin Pagan|The Ragin Pagan]] ([[User talk:The Ragin Pagan|talk]]) 18:20, 27 November 2018 (EST)


Hay there, i was just wondering if the book takes place during halo 3 due to seeing something in the back of the definitive edition of halo: first strike with the debriefing of Frederic-104, it said he had the rank of Lieutenant but he did not receive that rank till the end of ghosts of onyx. Please can you answer this comment cause if what i'm asking is not correct 343 got that debriefing wrong by giving him the wrong rank cause there is only 2 possible times this debriefing would of token place, after first strike when the spartans returned to earth or during glassland which would have had to have taken place during halo 3 while the covenant were still attacking earth.
Hay there, i was just wondering if the book takes place during halo 3 due to seeing something in the back of the definitive edition of halo: first strike with the debriefing of Frederic-104, it said he had the rank of Lieutenant but he did not receive that rank till the end of ghosts of onyx. Please can you answer this comment cause if what i'm asking is not correct 343 got that debriefing wrong by giving him the wrong rank cause there is only 2 possible times this debriefing would of token place, after first strike when the spartans returned to earth or during glassland which would have had to have taken place during halo 3 while the covenant were still attacking earth.
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Does halo glasslands answers questions like how many colonies are left and what the human population is like and what they are doing with forunner technology{{Unsigned|Spartan Matt}}
Does halo glasslands answers questions like how many colonies are left and what the human population is like and what they are doing with forunner technology{{Unsigned|Spartan Matt}}
:It just talks about colonies that have been glassed and colonies that are homeworlds of the characters.--'''''<span style="color:green">Lt. Commander</span>''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:cyan">光环的家伙1234</span>]] '''''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">Talk</span>]]''''' ''([[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:gold">Contribs</span>]])'' '''([[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:cyan">Edits</span>]])''' 00:00, 7 November 2011 (EST)
:It just talks about colonies that have been glassed and colonies that are homeworlds of the characters.--'''''[[Help:User Levels|<span style="color:green">Lt. Commander</span>]]''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:cyan">光环的家伙1234</span>]] '''''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">Talk</span>]]''''' ''([[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:gold">Contribs</span>]])'' '''([[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:cyan">Edits</span>]])''' 00:00, 7 November 2011 (EST)
::There is some mention of integration of Forerunner tech by humans, but basically, yea it's just the glassed colonies and the characters homeworlds.[[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]] 01:32, 7 November 2011 (EST)
::There is some mention of integration of Forerunner tech by humans, but basically, yea it's just the glassed colonies and the characters homeworlds.[[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]][[User:Spartansniper450/IRC Quotes|<span style="color:#000000">''Col.''</span>]] [[User:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:#00416A">Snipes</span>]][[User talk:Spartansniper450|<span style="color:gold">4</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Spartansniper450|<span style="color:silver">50</span>]][[File:Colonel Grade One.png|20px]] 01:32, 7 November 2011 (EST)


==Summary==
==Summary==
Somebody please update the plot section of this page ASAP. I still haven't gotten a copy, so I can't. But this NEEDS to be written, all the other pages are already. [[User:FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''pestilence'''</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''Phil'''</span>]], ''[[User talk:FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''pestilence!'''</span>]]'' 17:35, 11 December 2011 (EST)
Somebody please update the plot section of this page ASAP. I still haven't gotten a copy, so I can't. But this NEEDS to be written, all the other pages are already. [[User:FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''pestilence'''</span>]] [[Special:Contributions/FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''Phil'''</span>]], ''[[User talk:FatalSnipe117|<span style="color:green">'''pestilence!'''</span>]]'' 17:35, 11 December 2011 (EST)
:No kidding, hence the reason the out of date template is on the article.--'''''<span style="color:green">Commander</span>''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:red">Halofan1234</span>]] (''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">I say</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">the cabal</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:purple">does not exist</span>]]'') 17:37, 11 December 2011 (EST)
:No kidding, hence the reason the out of date template is on the article.--'''''[[Help:User Levels|<span style="color:green">Commander</span>]]''''' [[User:Halofan1234|<span style="color:red">Halofan1234</span>]] (''[[User talk:Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">I say</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Contributions/Halofan1234|<span style="color:purple">the cabal</span>]]'' ''[[Special:Editcount/Halofan1234|<span style"color:purple">does not exist</span>]]'') 17:37, 11 December 2011 (EST)
::I read the book and may work on it. It seems that no one has given it a try so I might. I went ahead and changed "Plot" to say "Plot Synopsis" since its not really the whole summary. If I get a whole summary written I'll go ahead and add the "Plot" section below "Plot Synopsis".--[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 11:14, 21 January 2012 (EST)
::I read the book and may work on it. It seems that no one has given it a try so I might. I went ahead and changed "Plot" to say "Plot Synopsis" since its not really the whole summary. If I get a whole summary written I'll go ahead and add the "Plot" section below "Plot Synopsis".--[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 11:14, 21 January 2012 (EST)
:::Go ahead.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}}
:::Go ahead.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}}
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::I agree. That is a bit of a hefty upgrade to materialize from nanotech but at the same time the jetpack may have been for "artistic" purposes (to give the chief his acrobats in the trailer) and may not be part of the suit or could be something that was added later after the automated upgrades. At the same time the extent of those nano upgrades hasn't been identified. So its theoretical for now.--[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 12:52, 12 February 2012 (EST)
::I agree. That is a bit of a hefty upgrade to materialize from nanotech but at the same time the jetpack may have been for "artistic" purposes (to give the chief his acrobats in the trailer) and may not be part of the suit or could be something that was added later after the automated upgrades. At the same time the extent of those nano upgrades hasn't been identified. So its theoretical for now.--[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 12:52, 12 February 2012 (EST)


:<s>I remember someone suggesting somewhere that Cortana was the one who beefed up the Warthogs in Forza 4 with survival gear, rather than just being powered down the whole time. It sounds reasonable, and if you accept that, it also sounds reasonable that she puyt her considerable intellect towards designing and fabricating a new, more advanced powered armour system for the Chief using the limited construction tools and resources of the FUD's armoury and vehicle maintenance sections. She is, after all, based on the mind of its creator, Dr. Halsey, and we know that an AI who doesn't keep busy is an AI on the short path to rampancy - it not only improves the Chief's survival prospects, but it lengthens her own lifespan too. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:27, 12 February 2012 (EST)</s>
:<s>I remember someone suggesting somewhere that Cortana was the one who beefed up the Warthogs in Forza 4 with survival gear, rather than just being powered down the whole time. It sounds reasonable, and if you accept that, it also sounds reasonable that she puyt her considerable intellect towards designing and fabricating a new, more advanced powered armour system for the Chief using the limited construction tools and resources of the FUD's armoury and vehicle maintenance sections. She is, after all, based on the mind of its creator, Dr. Halsey, and we know that an AI who doesn't keep busy is an AI on the short path to rampancy - it not only improves the Chief's survival prospects, but it lengthens her own lifespan too. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[w:c:halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:27, 12 February 2012 (EST)</s>
::Yeah, just realised this is the wrong talk page for this. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:28, 12 February 2012 (EST)
::Yeah, just realised this is the wrong talk page for this. -- [[User:Specops306|<b><font color=indigo>Specops306</font></b>]] [[w:c:halofanon:user:Specops306|<u><i><font color=blue><sup>Autocrat</sup></font></i></u>]] [[User talk:Specops306|<u><i><font color=purple><sup>Qur'a 'Morhek</sup></font></i></u>]] 18:28, 12 February 2012 (EST)


==Plot==
==Plot==
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:::It's a good thing to have something, but I have to agree it's a little long. Cutting it down to about a fourth of the length wouldn't hurt. To put things into perspective, I've been meaning to summarize the synopsis of  ''[[Halo: Cryptum]]'' for a while, and that's just about 1/4 of the length of this thing. Props for the hard work though; must've taken some time. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 06:43, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
:::It's a good thing to have something, but I have to agree it's a little long. Cutting it down to about a fourth of the length wouldn't hurt. To put things into perspective, I've been meaning to summarize the synopsis of  ''[[Halo: Cryptum]]'' for a while, and that's just about 1/4 of the length of this thing. Props for the hard work though; must've taken some time. --[[User:Jugus|<font color="MidnightBlue"><b>Jugus</b></font>]] <small>([[User talk:Jugus|<font color="Gray">Talk</font>]] | [[Special:Contributions/Jugus|<font color="Gray">Contribs</font>]])</small> 06:43, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
::::Thanks for the props but yeah, it is mad long and too long. I anticapted catching some heat for it but I attempted the un-done. I can try to shorten the plot but It'll take some more time. I may use ''Halo: Cryptum'' and ''[[Halo: Primordium|Primordium]]'' as templates for guidance. I actually have ideas of how to make it shorter based on those novels. So I'll give it a shot [again] if no one else agrees to the task (unlikely since the plot was never [fully] written since October 2011). --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 10:00, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
::::Thanks for the props but yeah, it is mad long and too long. I anticapted catching some heat for it but I attempted the un-done. I can try to shorten the plot but It'll take some more time. I may use ''Halo: Cryptum'' and ''[[Halo: Primordium|Primordium]]'' as templates for guidance. I actually have ideas of how to make it shorter based on those novels. So I'll give it a shot [again] if no one else agrees to the task (unlikely since the plot was never [fully] written since October 2011). --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 10:00, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
It's really long, but it's REALLY good.  So I have an idea: summarize the summary on this page, and then at the top, have "Main Article: Halo: Glasslands summary".  That way we can still keep your amazing summary, and keep the clutter on this page down. '''[[User:Vegerot|<font color="blue">('''or so it says in the sacred caves''')</font> Vegerot!]]''''' 10:47, 3 April 2012 (EDT)!
:Wholly unnecessary for a page (or a subpage) for a summary. There should only be one summary and that summary should be summarised as short as possible without leaving any crucial detail (hence why they call it ''a'' summary).— <span style="font-size:16px; font-family:OrbitronMedium;">[[User:Subtank|<span style="color:#FF4F00;">subtank</span>]]</span> 11:07, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
::@''[[User:Vegerot|Vegerot!]]'' Thanks man! Well now that you mentioned it, I can add my summary to my user page somewhere (probably user:talk) for anyone to look at and post the link somewhere here in discussions, and of course shorten up the summary for the article. --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 12:45, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
::*I went ahead and placed it under my user talk page: [[User_talk:Killamint#glasslands summary|Archived Summary]] --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 13:10, 3 April 2012 (EDT)
I re-summarized the plot. I did the best I can do at this point. Its still a little long but alot shorter than what it was before. If you feel you can do better, be my guess. --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 20:21, 4 April 2012 (EDT)
* Kudos to [[User: Jugus| Jugus]] for vastly shortening the plot! I believe its good/short enough. <s>So with that being said, is it okay if we take down the "Summarize section" tag? Or is the plot still too long?</s> --[[User talk:Killamint|Killamint]] 18:14, 27 April 2012 (EDT)
Nevermind. Thanks Jugus. --'''''[[User:Killamint|<span style="color:black; font-family: Aerial;">Killamint</span>]]''''' <small>'''''[[User talk:Killamint|<span style="color:red">KillaEX</span>]]'''''</small>  12:40, 20 May 2012 (EDT)
== Beret ==
Why was Devereaux wearing a beret when she arrived at Bravo-6? ODSTs are Marines, not Army.{{Unsigned|65.71.124.226}}
:Because this isn't America and not everything about the UNSC was carried over from the United States Armed Forces. {{User:Grizzlei/Sig}}
::False alarm, turns out it was a BREVET.{{Unsigned|108.67.162.18}}

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