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→Covenant era: added Escharum laying a foundation on Doisac to facilitate the Banished's rise to power. Efforts began towards the end of the Covenant War per Encyclopedia 22 page 446.
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→Created uprising: removed the Banished uniting "with" the various Jiralhanae clans on Doisac, as the wording of the Encyclopedia described the Banished "uniting the clans". Nothing in the Encyclopedia describes the Banished uniting "with" the Jiralhanae clans, by they are the uniting force that brought the clans together..
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→Post-war: further refining the wording of the Banished's growth and rallying of the Jiralhanae clans
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→Post-war: further edits to the Banished's expansion
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Added the Banished in the government entry indended beneath "various dictatorships". Though, you could also add the Banished as the leading Jiralhanae polity on Doisac in 2559 prior to Doisac's razing, given they've united the clans akin to Thel uniting the Sangheili keeps on Sanghelios. However, this had been excluded.
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→Post-war: changed wording on Jiralhanae who don't flock to the Banished. One Jiralhanae Chieftain doesn't not constitute "many" views of Jiralhanae, and added passage on Jiralhanae who have become wary of anything resembling the former Covenant. Added mention of Lydus failing to instill order on Doisac.
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→Created uprising: removed "as Jiralhanae infighting continued" under Created uprising. Text previous cited a passage of Warial in the 2022 Encyclopedia, however, the Encyclopedia was providing a broad history of Warial, and the Encyclopedia doesn't directly mentioned that Jiralhanae infighting was happening during Cortana's occupation or the Banished's resistance of it. This text is much more applicable to the Warial article and Banished rise to power, rather than this section.
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→Post-war: several revisions to the post-war section for Jiralhanae history. Re-ordered some paragraphs, removed mentioned of the Children of Oth Sonin being a "government" (never been directly referred to as such), a bit more clarification around the Voice or Maardoth, stuff on Banished's history. A lot of the stuff towards the end of many not joining the Banished does cpme off as extraneous admittedly. Removed "working along the Sangheili is frown upon"- not in direct reference to Banished
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→Post-war: rephrased the engagement between the Banished and the Children of Oth Sonin to better reflect the wording in the 2022 Encyclopedia. Previous wording implied that the Banished were subcontracted out by Lydus while the 2022 Encyclopedia phrased the relationshipbas a mutually beneficial deal.
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→Created uprising: similar to the change in the Razing of Oth Sonin page, Outcasts never states that Atriox was simply one of Doisac's many warlords and only refers to Atriox as "a Jiralhanae warlord" without any elaboration on that being Doisac specific. Also removed mention of Jiralhanae infighting, as no refernece in the Encyclopedia indicates Jiralhanae infighting persisted into Cortana's occupation. Reference certaibly made on the broader scope of Warial and Teash.
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Reverted edits by 87.80.198.242 (talk) to last revision by Dr Mutran
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Undo revision 1548212 by BaconShelf (talk) wait no i'm stupid
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Reverted edits by 132.147.113.199 (talk) to last revision by TheArb1ter117
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Undo revision 1541883 by Revanfear (talk) The edit you reverted is in agreement with what you said, it does not include the visor on the page (compare revisions). It just removes the Banished speculation part, as Bacon said that the Banished manufacturing the visor is not in-universe. See talk?
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Whatever they made a visor or not, it doesn't have anything to do with the planet's status. Just putting the source of the information is enough if people are interested. The visor thing doesn't need to be mention in the planet's page.
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→Created conflict: If we aren't including the Banished manufacturing the visor as in-universe, the Banished part should be removed altogether. Rather than attributing the "rich in materials that will fuel generations" to the Banished, which the quote doesn't state.
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Undo revision 1541880 by Editorguy (talk) I wouldn't take the Visor seriously as an in-universe object anymore than I'd take the MCC visors seriously
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Undo revision 1541879 by Revanfear (talk) quote states the visor was made by them, just as the AAP/HEARTPLATE was made by them
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